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Blurb:
Debbie Nordall was tired of the guys her age who only wanted to party and change girlfriends every other week. She wanted someone older, wiser, and more sophisticated to love.
Mick Reed spotted her right away. The woman at the bar was confident, beautiful, and young… everything he wanted. She was the woman who would commit to him fully, and in return, he’d give her anything she wanted. Was he fooling himself to think that age didn’t matter?
An Excerpt from Abby Wood’s Twice Her Age
The click of her high-heeled boots against the concrete floor of the parking garage echoed an ominous warning. She inhaled through her nose and pulled the edges of her soft pink blouse together more. It did no good to get excited over a blind date.
“Remember, I’m not asking you to fall in love with the guy.” Cheryl bumped her hip against Debbie’s hip. “Just have a little fun.”
She ran her fingers under her eyes and hoped she didn’t have raccoon patches. All she wanted to do is go home and curl up on the end of the couch. Thank God it was Friday and she had the weekend to recover. Here she was, twenty-five years old, and the two-year-old tots at the preschool where she worked ran her ragged most days.
“I think you’ll really like him. He works with Gary.” Cheryl gave a little hop and walked backward so they could talk face-to-face. “Did I tell you he’s taking me away next weekend? Our first real commitment that this is the real deal we’re fooling around with.”
Debbie raised her brows and smiled. “Yeah, so you said. I’m happy for you.”
“But…?” Cheryl dropped back beside her and continued walking.
She sighed. “Look, Cher, I’m not too sure about tonight. I’m not big on blind dates. They never work out.”
Not only that, the men her friends picked out for her never did a damn thing for her. She wasn’t interested in partying at the bar or going to their houses to sit back and count how many times they could yell at the referee on television about the bad job he was doing on the football game.
“Here’s the deal. If this guy is a creep…I’m out of here.” She pulled back her shoulders and waited for the pedestrian light to change. “I’ll just call a cab to take me home, so it doesn’t mean you have to stop your night with Gary.”
Her friend shook her head and stepped off the curb. “Fine, but I think this guy is right up your alley.”
“That’d be a surprise,” she muttered.
Cheryl opened the door to McAllister’s Bar and Restaurant, a high-class lounge on Fifth Avenue, and let Debbie enter first. “I’m going to run to the little girls’ room before the guys get here.”
She nodded. “I’ll wait in the bar for you. Grab me when they get here.”
“Don’t disappear on me.” Her best friend narrowed her eyes. “You promised.”
Debbie smiled. “Wouldn’t dream of it.” Waving her hand, she motioned for her to go. “I’ll give him the five-minute test. Go. Go!”
Smiling at the hostess standing guard over the customers waiting for their turn for an available table in the restaurant, she slipped up the stairs into the bar. She squeezed between the bodies standing around drinking, mingling, and approached the bar.
The bartender shot her a wink and held up one finger, signaling he’d be right over to take her order. She laid her clutch on the bar and slid atop a stool to wait. One little glass of Irish cream and she’d find the strength to go through with dinner. After that, no promises.
The good-looking bartender with his short-cropped hair and black tie danced over and leaned across the counter. “What can I get you, beautiful?”
“Irish cream caramel on ice, please.”
“Make that two, and I’ll pay for the lady’s drink.” A low, husky voice over her shoulder raised the hair at the back of her neck.
The bartender nodded. “Comin’ up.”
The man stood close enough that his body brushed the back of her hair, and a shiver raced up her spine. A whiff of cologne came off him, and she closed her eyes to inhale. Drakkar.
Microorgasmic by his scent alone, she feared facing the man and dashing her pleasure with reality. Probably an out-of-shape divorcé whose main goal it is to see how many phone numbers he can get in a single night.
“Is this seat taken?”
She sighed and glimpsed a strong masculine hand pointing at the bar stool to his left. She shook her head. Get ready for the lame-ass pick-up line. One, two, three…
The man sat down and remained silent. Although, the heat from his gaze warmed her skin. She squirmed on the stool. His lack of conversation piqued her curiosity. If he bought her a drink, wasn’t he going to try to flirt a little?
The bartender returned with two small tumblers filled with rich, creamy-colored liquid swimming in ice. She smiled and picked up the glass. The least she could do was acknowledge the man.
“Thank you for the drink.” She turned, and the sip she was preparing to take never met her lips.
Dark haired with a sprinkle of silver at the temples, the man wore sexy like a second skin. Black slacks with a white silk dress shirt against his tan skin screamed sophisticated…and dangerous. She pegged him at forty-eight, maybe fifty years old, because of the lines at the outside edges of his dark brown eyes.
He lifted the corner of his mouth, a very tantalizing mouth with full lips, and showed a hint of a teasing manner. “Go ahead, take a sip.”
She raised the glass and let the ice-cold liquor coat her tongue. Her eyelids fluttered at the rich, decadent taste. Between the allure of the older man, the cologne he wore, and the taste of her favorite drink, she’d be surprised if she didn’t leave a puddle of pussy juice on the bar stool.
“Again.” He lifted his glass, daring her to follow his order.
Her nipples hardened under the almost see-through blouse. His gaze swept down and settled on her reaction to him. Not wanting to disappoint, she savored another mouthful. Holding it on her tongue, she moaned softly. Oh God, this is wicked.
“Good?” His lips curved as he stared at her mouth.
She shuddered under his gaze. “Y-yes. Delicious.”
“Are you here with someone?”
She gazed at the way he raised his arm and brought his drink to his mouth. He held the glass under his nose, inhaling the sweet aroma before gently setting the rim against his lower lip. Her lower stomach quivered, and she found herself leaning forward, closer, to take in the way the tumbler caressed his lips before he swallowed.
He smiled. The lines at the corner of his eyes crinkled in amusement. “I take it you’re here by yourself?”
Oh God, he’s left me speechless. What do I tell him? “I came with a girlfriend, but she’s meeting her boyfriend for dinner.” She glanced across the bar. “I decided to have a drink before joining them.”
“Excellent. I’d love to share your company, and maybe we can get to know one another?” He gazed around the room. “I’m glad I decided to stop in and have a drink before heading home.”
Nodding, she smiled. Could he be more perfect for me?
“Deb.”
She slowly turned around and found Cheryl standing in the bar, frowning. Wrinkling her nose, Debbie knew her friend wasn’t going to like hearing that she changed her mind. She’d go a year without dates to continue sitting at the bar with the promise of seeing Mr. Sexy again, if only to soak in his presence for a little longer.
“The guys are here, and there’s a table ready for us.” Her friend glanced over at the man beside her and quickly ignored him. “Get your ass off the stool, girlfriend, and let’s go.”
Debbie sucked her bottom lip in and caught it between her teeth. “I –”
“She’s staying here.”
Cheryl’s head shifted on her neck, and her eyes widened. “Excuse me? I don’t believe I was talking to you.” She pivoted and turned her back on him. “Why is this old dude telling you what to do? What’s going on, Debbie? I thought you said you’d give the guy Gary’s bringing with him a chance.”
“I…I changed my mind.” She gave a short laugh. “I’m sorry. Things have changed.” Looking over at the man, she smiled. “Go on without me, Cheryl. I’ll make this up to you. I swear.”
Cheryl leaned in and whispered in her ear, “He’s twice your age. Are you drunk?”
She threw back her head and laughed. “Not at all. For the first time, I’m doing exactly what I want.”
“Unbelievable.” Cheryl gazed at both of them, scrunched up her face, and shook her head. “Freaking unbelievable.”
Her friend walked off without a backward glance. She swallowed. She’d make Cheryl understand later.
They’d known each other since college, but it was hard for her to explain to Cheryl about her attraction to older men or her lack of desire for someone her own age. It wasn’t like she went out of her way to turn younger men down. She didn’t understand the whole dynamic of finding herself drawn to men twice her age herself half the time.
Debbie swiveled back around. The man held out his hand. Her hand automatically lifted. Her fingers were swallowed up in the size of his gentle hold.
“Mick…Mick Reed.” He turned over her hand, brought her palm up to his lips, and kissed the sensitive skin.
Oh. My. God. I want to fuck this man.
“Deb…Debbie Nordall.”
He set her hand on the counter of the bar and nodded with that knowing smile. “Finish your drink, Debbie Nordall. I’ve got plans for you.”
She raised the glass. Her hand shook. The ice rattled against the sides.
After swallowing, she hurried to lick her upper lip. “Plans?”
Mick tipped back his head and finished his drink. Leaning forward, he removed a wallet from his back pocket and set a twenty-dollar bill on the bar under his empty glass. “Do you like water?”
“Mm…” She lowered her gaze. His slacks hugged his thighs, showcasing hard, powerful muscles that screamed to have a woman’s hands on them. “To drink, swim, or play in?”
He chuckled. “None of the above.”
The heat of his stare forced her to swallow the rest of her drink. She set it down on the bar. Narrowing her eyes, she tilted her head. “There’s something about you…”
He curled his lip and leaned closer. “Tell me.”
Deb shook her head and gazed down at her hands. This is crazy. I’ve wanted a man like this forever. I’ve fantasized about this very thing happening to me repeatedly, and yet… God, should she really follow him and find out what he planned?
Not sure if the alcohol made her freer with her thoughts or the man himself, she leaned toward him. Nose to nose, she whispered, “You turn me on.”
He blinked, and without losing eye contact, he stood up and leaned over. “I know.”
“I can’t believe I’m doing this.” She raised her brows and bit down on her lip. “Do you mind if I find my girlfriend, see if she’ll listen to me, and explain that I’m leaving with you?”
“No, of course.” He cupped her cheek and strummed his thumb over her lips. “Tell her we’ll be at the Betlow Marina, slot forty-two and I’ll make sure you get home safely. I can even give her references to call, if she wants to check me out.”
“I don’t think I have to go that far.” She grinned. “Thank you.”
Standing up, she gazed up at him. “I’ll hurry.”
“No rush. We’ve got all night.” He winked.
© Abby Wood, July 2010
All Rights Reserved
hey i am really sorry that some one took your story and tried to make it look like it was thiers. but i really liked it! alot in fact! its really good!
Thank you, Tonya. It is sad that there are people who stoop to this level of stealing. To find out that she has posted it at several places is aggravating, and I’m doing my best to see that she never does this to me, or any other author, again.
Wow I’m. Sorry that happened to you, I came across it and thought she was the author. I read your excerpt and saw how its exactly the same. Its a story though. (Your version) she could at least have credited it to you
Thanks, Kaylyn. Nope, she stole the book word for word, and only changed the names of the characters to have it fit as fan fiction. Not only did she take money out of my pocket, she put the fan fiction sites (plural) she posted at in jeopardy.
While what she did was wrong and completely unethical, she’ll probably have ended up actually putting money into your pocket, since I’m sure there will be multiple readers of “her” fanfic who liked it and will now buy it to see it through to completion.
You’re probably right, Musicdaydreams. One thing about being an erotic author is I never push my book onto someone who doesn’t read erotic books. These kinds of books aren’t for everyone, and I respect that. I’ve read comments about those who read the chapters the woman put up and were disgusted by the “nasty” writing. That makes me angry, not because of them not liking my writing, but that someone posted it out in the open where they were subject to the material they would not normally read.
I was really enjoying what we now know to be your story. I can’t believe that someone would copy another authors work like that.
Just purchased the ebook from the kindle store.
Thank you so much, Fanfictionfan. I have received so many emails and messages from fan fiction readers showing their support for me, I really appreciate it.
I was really enjoying your story on twcs glad to know I can purchase the real thing from the author.So sorry you were ripped off. It is really sad when ppl feel they need to stoop so low…..
Thank you, cmitch.
It is sad, but one good thing came out of it. I’ve had some wonderful people support me, and their kindness makes me believe that the good outweighs the bad.
Love this story. so sorry that it was stolen from you. I purchase it but dont have a kindle or anything like that….hope i got the right format for the PC. Cannot wait to finish reading it.
Hi Lynn and thank you!
If you’ve downloaded it in pdf or html form, you should be okay to read it on your computer. If you used a .prc file, you’d have to download the Kindle App for your computer first. (It’s free). If you downloaded .epub, I think you have to use an online converter to convert it to .rtf. I hope I covered all the different files. If not, let me know and I can find out the answer on how to fix it so you can read it.
Is there any way I can buy the book w/o it being an e book
Hi Taylor,
No, I’m sorry, the book is only available in ebook form. The pdf file and html file you can buy to download will make it possible to read on your computer though.
Thank you for asking. The only paperbook I have right now is a book called, Didja Know…?, a paranormal erotic book with a menage love story.
I went to amazon and bought your story I felt bad because I read it on the writers coffee shop it is a very good story and she or he is a jerk for stealing something that no doubt took a long time to write and put together i’m just glad you found out when you did
Thank you
I was browsing through the fanfiction books on TWCS and came to the this story. I was curious to find out more information so I checked out your home page. I decided to buy your book Tagging her Lynx for 2 reasons. 1) I love life mate stories that are erotic 2) your response to Musicdaydreams comment. I liked your honesty. I never read the book on TWCS b/c I’m not a fan of non-paranormal stories.
I’m hoping to buy Too Right a wrong soon. Premise seems interesting.
gotobed – Sorry, I didn’t see this yesterday. For some reason, your comment went to the spam folder. Thank you for checking out my books. It’s always interesting to hear how people hear about my books, and I’m glad you found some that interest you. I have two other books that are paranormal…To Play or Obey? (vamps and deals with bdsm), and Didja Know…? is a ghost-like story that deals with menage. Didja Know is also available as a print book.
I hope you enjoy Tagging Her Lynx!